Your stationary looks interesting it is clean simple and easy to read.
The only issues I'm having is that the information in the letter head and business card are getting too condensed.
1. The business card the Name and title should be separate from the other information. It could even be above the line graphic in that negative space. Also the contact info is getting too press together give is some breathing space for each other. Maybe let it out more. the one missing item is the address of the radio station.
2. The letterhead does not need so much information. the address of the radio station is enough and you should explore more positions for the contact info.
3. The envelop need the radio station address. unless you are going to but a sticker of some kind to indicate a return address.
Well done Lucineh. I really like it. Lets talk about them. Which one should I start from?
Lets start with the color theme which is working very well. It's warm and by adding white, you have a good contrast between your dark and lights.
The business card layout has a good balance. I like how you right justified the type. I'm not too sure about the back of the business card though. I think it's repetitive since you have the logo on the front as well. I would enlarge the logo on the back so that maybe not all of it shows. And lower the opacity on the logo so that it kind of fades in the background.
The letterhead is also well designed. It matched with the business card. I would do the same thing to the back of the letterhead as the business card.
The envelope! I would add more white to the surface. It's too yellow. I'm sure it stands out but it will make it hard to red unless you add white labels for the address.
Good job overall. I like it a lot. The design is professional and I can see it as a real design. :)
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Your stationary looks interesting it is clean simple and easy to read.
The only issues I'm having is that the information in the letter head and business card are getting too condensed.
1. The business card the Name and title should be separate from the other information. It could even be above the line graphic in that negative space.
Also the contact info is getting too press together give is some breathing space for each other. Maybe let it out more. the one missing item is the address of the radio station.
2. The letterhead does not need so much information. the address of the radio station is enough and you should explore more positions for the contact info.
3. The envelop need the radio station address. unless you are going to but a sticker of some kind to indicate a return address.
Well done Lucineh. I really like it. Lets talk about them. Which one should I start from?
Lets start with the color theme which is working very well. It's warm and by adding white, you have a good contrast between your dark and lights.
The business card layout has a good balance. I like how you right justified the type. I'm not too sure about the back of the business card though. I think it's repetitive since you have the logo on the front as well. I would enlarge the logo on the back so that maybe not all of it shows. And lower the opacity on the logo so that it kind of fades in the background.
The letterhead is also well designed. It matched with the business card. I would do the same thing to the back of the letterhead as the business card.
The envelope! I would add more white to the surface. It's too yellow. I'm sure it stands out but it will make it hard to red unless you add white labels for the address.
Good job overall.
I like it a lot. The design is professional and I can see it as a real design. :)
Hedyeh
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